the promised poem

this is the poem dat i written before.xda title pun. ahahah..any suggetsion?? comments and critics are welcomed, njoy..

Its been a while since Death visited the family,
should it be welcomed or not?
some waited for it, some didn't.

Some of The Waiters are waiting the ending of a journey,
some of the waiters are waiting to reap the rewards from The Waiters,
The Doesn't Waiters, prepared or not, are in for a surprise,
because willing or not, it's sure to come.

It's been a while since Death visited the family,
The Doesn't Waiters has outnumbered The Waiters,
The Waiters tries to make The Doesn't Waiters become like themselves,
but The Doesn't Waiters still had a lot to accomplished before he can waits.
do The Waiters need to change The Doesn't Waiters?
since they themselves doesn't wait before they become The Waiters.
or maybe The Waiters are seeking companionship in their waiting,
gripping fear of being alone at the end.

It's been a while since Death visited the family,
the last time it did, everybody are tearful,
maybe for The Waiters, it's the tear of sadness or joy, respectively of their waiting,
maybe for The Doesn't Waiters, it's the tear of shock or nothingness,
that being obtuse, they forget Death too will visit them,
taking them to the end,
that The Waiters are waiting for.

Kamal Ishak, April 2010